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Music, Literature and... Vanity
 
My First Love

Hello, Welcome to my first tabblo, I'm new to this so please excuse the amateur-ish design and enjoy as you read about me.

 

So to start my name is Patrick Lim,and I'm just your typical teenager. People's first impression of me is usually boring, and I don't blame them because I usually look dead and asleep, but when people get to know me they see my "other side".

 

People usually get the misconception that I am too serious and pessimistic but on the contrary, even if I don't look like it, I'm actually a very cheerful, carefree and optimistic person; this is probably because when I was younger I was too serious and ended up not having fun like a kid's supposed to.

 

I have many hobbies, one of them would be reading, at the moment I am reading Shakespeare's "Love's Labors Lost". Another one of my hobbies is listening to music, my favorite genres are rock and acoustic. I play the bass guitar and I am in a band, I think. Although I have been playing for a year I'm still not that good at it and I still need some guidance from my band-mates.

 

Some things about me people will be surprised to know about me would be, for one, I am bad at grammar and a horridly bad speller, I think over the course of this tabblo I've made numerous grammatical and spelling errors. The most surprising thing however would be the fact that I am quite vain, whenever I see a good photo-op I whip out my cell phone and take a picture, I also like taking pictures of random things and editing them in photoshop, as you can see, to give them a sort of mood. And the most surprising thing is that the first time I ever performed as a Bassist just about two weeks before was my first time to hold a bass guitar, I guess that was reckless of me.

 

Ok so I think that's about it about me, hope you enjoyed reading.

 
My first serous instrument, the Bass Guitar
 
The Band, Genesis + Revelation = Genevation
 
Music is Life
 
This may be the reason why people think I'm too serious.
 
The Bass Guitar is one of the things that gives color to my otherwise boring life
 
My life used to be a blur before these
COMMENTS
Sirnicolay said at 10:21 p.m. on Jun 20, 2008:
Hey Plim! I admire how you organized the pictures and the design of this tabblo, but you are right--the grammatical aspect of your essay can still be improved on. Try to be more conscious of your punctuation marks. I hope you can review some lessons on run-ons and comma splices. ;)

Anyway, please post this tabblo in our multiply group site. Thanks! :)

http://english2advanced.multiply.com/journal/item/2/First_Tabblo_Exercise_Hobbies

Have a great weekend! :)
Patrickplim said at 11:26 p.m. on Jun 20, 2008:
Thank you 'cher, I'll try to work on my grammar ^_^;;
Chilla said at 1:51 a.m. on Jun 21, 2008:
I really like this tabblo. It is interesting and well constructed and I really like what you have done with some of the photos on photoshop.
Tabblo_gh0st said at 4:58 a.m. on Jun 21, 2008:
"I play the bass guitar and I am in a band, I think." =))
YorkJodi said at 5:33 p.m. on Jun 21, 2008:
Welcome to Tabblo... This is an interesting & quite good 1st post... I did not notice any grammar or punctuation errors... but then you notice I don't do punctuation... haha... I run all together with 3 dots between the thoughts... I like the photoshopped photo of your band...
Patrickplim said at 2:15 a.m. on Jun 22, 2008:
Thanks Chilla512. Josh, it's true I have no idea what happened to Genevation =)). Thanks YorkJodi, don't worry they're there haha.
Tabblo_gh0st said at 6:17 a.m. on Jun 22, 2008:
so what happened to marty asking for practice every so often??
Marranei said at 6:34 p.m. on Jul 7, 2008:
Nice to meet you!
Debdog said at 1:48 a.m. on Jul 9, 2008:
great job!
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