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Staring At Windows On Rainy Evening

Staring At Windows On A Rainy Evening

 

Whose lights these are I already know--


her spouse is in the village though.


He will not see me staring here


at his pretty wife, drunk--what a show!


My little dear will find her beer


to match with her salted deer,


between the fruits and frozen cake,


the starkest evening--wet and queer.


She pours her Jäger and then spake,


"I reckon there seems to be a mistake."


Beneath the sound of raindrops a beep--

an accident--I step on my jeep's brake.


She stands, screams, taking a peep.


I drive away like mad and promise to keep


my nose to self before I sleep--

and stop stalking her before I sleep.

 

 

***

 

(Of course,

my poem is a pastiche

of the great Robert Frost's

"Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening")

COMMENTS
Hhwind said at 1:02 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Nice shots lovely poem
Noe said at 1:52 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
I like it James, the shapes, the colors, the poem... great one! =)
Chilla said at 2:10 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Lovely images an a great layout.
Ira said at 2:47 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Very good bright photos. And remarkable sensation of a cosiness that are till this party flown down.
Wildthing said at 3:37 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Super set & words, James. Don't get caught at the window with your camera, though. People might get the wrong idea :)
Sirnicolay said at 3:49 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
THanks, Teo, Noe, Celia, Ira, and Mike.

Don't worry, Mike.. I don't often shoot pictures from my windows. Haha! :)
Andre. said at 4:11 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Very romantic...I think...
21-gramm said at 7:23 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Great poem, sir James, exellent mood of rainy photo.
[as for me, the shot whis Jäger is slightly from the overall picture, it lools somewhat alien, does not add poetry, but rather diminish, but this is only my humble opinion]
Moabjeeper said at 7:25 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Keep your camera dry.
Sirnicolay said at 9:24 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Coming from you, Andre, I am not surprised. Haha!

Den, the Jäger reinforces the poem. I thought it fits because the rest of the images are just wet--the dryness of the alcohol makes it a special part of the tabblo. It's not an outcast but rather at its heart.

Thanks, Bob. :)
Marcif said at 9:55 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Really cool shots!
YorkJodi said at 10:37 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Very neat photos of the lights through the windows & raindrops... great effects...
EMA said at 11:46 a.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Cool effects made by the light and the raindrops on the glass window!
SnowWhite said at 2:57 p.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Great effects, cool tabblo :-)
Candlepower said at 3:33 p.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Dreammy and so well done!
Sirnicolay said at 7:33 p.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Thank you, Marci, Jodi, Edite, Lorraine and Pat :)
SterlingGray said at 8:36 p.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Wondeful shots and a great poem!!!
Johnpgirvan57 said at 9:06 p.m. on Jun 29, 2008:
Great tabblo!
CANDYCANE said at 12:50 p.m. on Jun 30, 2008:
GREAT SHOTS, AND I LIKE THE POEM. COOL EFFECTS TOO.
Antbobbie said at 1:23 p.m. on Jun 30, 2008:
I like the top picture a lot.
Debdog said at 1:58 p.m. on Jun 30, 2008:
ohhhhhh LOL!!!!!!! love this,
Sirnicolay said at 12:09 a.m. on Jul 1, 2008:
Thanks, Sterling, John, Rhonda, Bobbie, and Deb :)
Hellodear said at 2:32 a.m. on Jul 1, 2008:
All you people are not praising james. You are telling facts. I have to accept.

Thanks
Kam
Pkeener said at 5:40 p.m. on Jul 1, 2008:
thank you for the disclaimer, because i kept thinking...hmm dont i know this? wild, James. ilike the second to last one. it reminds me of when i used to look at lights with out my glasses on when i was a kid. Hotel Modern. very cool.
Siagian said at 10:55 a.m. on Jul 2, 2008:
gorgeous photos creating a melancholic mood. well done!
Emmabro said at 6:13 p.m. on Jul 2, 2008:
i love rain on a window so i love this ...great shots !!!
Sirnicolay said at 7:53 a.m. on Jul 7, 2008:
Thank you, Kam, Pam, Woody and Emma :)
GeorgePL said at 8:35 a.m. on Jul 7, 2008:
Nice photos and poem. I like your Tabblo a lot.
Cowgirl said at 7:35 p.m. on Jul 8, 2008:
Cool look love the poem........
Sirnicolay said at 7:23 p.m. on Jul 14, 2008:
Thanks, George and Bobbie! :)
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