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We Were A Band Telling A Story, We Were Genevation.
 
Genevation: Pronunciation \ˈje-nə-və-shən\ noun: From Beginning to end
 
A painting with a bassist on the far left, a drummer at the back, a singer in the center, a guitarist on the right and the keyboards on the far right.
 
Thanks To Bene who took this picture

The deep and smooth sound of the bass guitar resounded in the dimly lit storage room. Feeling a strong vibration within my chest with each string I plucked, it felt as if each note was resonating in my chest. The mellow sound reminded me of coffee shops I’ve visited in the past, the sound calming me almost to the point that drowsiness was upon me.

The chaotic sound of the drums came in waking me from my trance. It blasted throughout the underground parking lot with such force it was surprising that the car alarms didn’t go off. The drums and the bass guitar complimented each other setting the tempo and beat of the song. The ear splitting rhythm of the drum was painful for the ears yet it was natural. It was like a sudden clap of thunder on a stormy night, shocking but at the same time expected.

The calm sound of the keyboards entered each note sharp and precise, rang within the corridor of the house above. The angelic sound of the keyboard was a contrast to the heavy and loud crashing sounds of the drums but it still blended in perfectly, like a painting with many different contrasting colors but creating a beautiful picture.

Then the guitars came in last, creating the distinct rhythmic tone, giving the song it’s distinct tune and personality. Not overpowering the other instruments but filling the gap between the deep, mellow bass, the loud, chaotic drums and the melodic and precise keyboards. Completing the ensemble.

With the whole band now playing it was like a painting, each figure in the painting tells its own story but even in doing so they as a whole create a single scene. We were like characters in a play, all of us playing our part in order to continue with the play. We were a band playing a beautiful song, telling a wonderful story, we were Genevation.

Then a voice rang out, a deep and raspy voice, it wasn’t the best of voices but it was a voice all the same. The voice started to form words for the song, words that fit the song, words that told a story.

The voiced died out now, the guitar toning down steadily, the keyboards slowing its pace, the drumbeats suppressed, and the bass indistinct now. And when the last note was played the song ended.

COMMENTS
Dusdee421 said at 5:20 a.m. on Jul 11, 2008:
It's quite good. I was able to vividly imagine you guys practicing in the storage room. I think you could've added a bit more things to liven things a bit. Still, it's pretty good.
Miguelfernandoco said at 5:20 a.m. on Jul 11, 2008:
It was a good read. However though it was thoroughly described I couldn't really imagine the music flowing from the band. Not to be rude, but it didn't really strike me that deeply. The bright white text contrasting the pitch black background kind of made my eyes hurt; Another background color would be appreciated. I think you should change the font or the color as to not make them clash with the brightness of the pictures. I commend your pictures though as they let me see the scene more vividly and made the essay more beautiful. All in all it was a good read just please just make it flow more smoothly and more coherently and you will become one good writer. :)
Tabblo_gh0st said at 7:02 a.m. on Jul 11, 2008:
Haha! "Then a voice rang out, a deep and raspy voice, it wasn’t the best of voices but it was a voice all the same. The voice started to form words for the song, words that fit the song, words that told a story." I like how you focused on the words than the tone of the voice. =))
Tabblo_gh0st said at 7:03 a.m. on Jul 11, 2008:
"A painting with a bassist on the far left, a drummer at the back, a singer in the center, a guitarist on the right and a keyboards on the far right." Isn't it supposed to be keyboardist or something so that it will flow right with the rest of the words you used?
Tabblo_gh0st said at 7:04 a.m. on Jul 11, 2008:
Well, besides from that, I think this was a good read. I can hear your voice as I read this essay and yes, this really comes from Plim. It was very abstract and deep. Just as I expected. Good job! ;)
Jazpertan said at 8:39 a.m. on Jul 11, 2008:
I like how you described each sound, and the painting analogy was pretty good. Oh and the guy with a blue shirt and the keyboard looks really good. He must be a professional model (:P). But there were some grammatical errors. Especially this sentence: The calm sound of the keyboards entered each note sharp and precise, rang within the corridor of the house above.
Bsanti said at 9:31 a.m. on Jul 11, 2008:
Like Jasper, I liked how you tried to share to the reader the different sounds. But as I have told you, I feel that some parts are confusing. None the less good work!
Sirnicolay said at 10:47 p.m. on Jul 11, 2008:
Even though you have used many of the images here so many times in your previous tabblos (haha!), I still think that your essay and pictures are all amazing. I love how the images are juxtaposed to the essay. Very creative layout. Kudos! 94.
Mario_bao said at 10:55 p.m. on Jul 11, 2008:
I liked how you described the sounds from each instrument. It had a great effect. However, the part where you were criticizing the vocalist's (Vitt's!) voice didn't seem to fit in with the essay. But your pictures complimented your essay pretty well. Overall, it was a good essay.
Soccer0rocker said at 10:44 a.m. on Jul 12, 2008:
Wow, you made the music "sound" perfectly to my ears. I wish we would be able to live up to this, except for the vocalist, I'd want her to have a better description. :)) I really like the essay, I felt it.
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