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Pathway Through the Storm

So, there I was

Waiting in the netherspace

for the mist to lift,

for the light to come.

But the whiteness darkened

into a storm that began

with a few raindrops

dampening my upturned face.

"No!" I cried and turned away,

raging against the storm

that threatened to wash away

all my hopes and dreams. 

But at that moment I realized

that my dreams had already died

and the netherspace I waited in

was the mortuary for a part of me.

"Alas!  Alas!  What loss!" I cried

for the part of me that died.

So, in this wake I yearn to wake,

but here I stand amidst this storm. 

"This storm! This storm!  I hate!"  I roared.

Nowhere to flee.  Bereft.  Forlorn.

Hope has flown.  The wind has blown.

"Ah, but now's the time to be reborn!"

Who said that?  Why?  Where?

I looked around. I turned around.

Nothing.  No one.  Probably just the wind.

I laughed bitterly, "How can I be reborn?"

Half-heartedly I reached for the dreams' remains

and watched the ashes run through my fingers,

scattering into the gusts,

clumping to the ground with the rain.

I looked at the ground

and noticed that a path

stretched before my feet.

Is this a path out of the storm?

Following the path,

I moved with the hope of progression.

Perhaps I can move on?

Perhaps I can move through the storm?

The path led to a junction.

An intersection of many

paths lay ahead of me.

Which one shall I take?

Within my being

a light brightened

as I pondered the paths of possibilities.

Adventure yawned into a beckon. 

I awake...

 

 

...and s t r e t c h.

 

 

I walk on,

feeling less alone. 

Poem by Yonder Creature (c) 2008

Credits:

The 3 photos of the cloaked person is by Clint Hay.

The black and white photo is by Paul Tien.  The grainy quality is due to my lazy re-sizing of his photo. 

Thank you for letting me use your photos here! 

The rest of the photos are mine. 

COMMENTS
Andre. said at 3:37 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
What a nice show. Beautiful idea:)
Welshchick said at 3:37 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
So intriguing! Our broken dreams can help show us the way to new paths of adventure :^) ...exquisite and comforting poem my friend!
Welshchick said at 3:38 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
and photos to add to the drama and wonder~
Snooway said at 4:10 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
I left a message but it disappeared, so here I go again. What a beautiful poem and the photos illustrate the mood perfectly. I love all the different paths and the last photo is great.:)
OscarDaniel said at 6:59 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
Great tabblo , nice sequence, the last one is my fav picture.
DocEna said at 7:44 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
Great pics and poem..my fav is the b&w with the statues...
Mirella said at 7:57 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
Bellissimo il Poema e le foto lo rappresentano bene. Bellissimo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wflorence said at 7:58 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
This is outstanding. Great poem and amazing photos.
Wildthing said at 9:27 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
Mesmerizing. I keep returning to #3, so Goth. And the words bring the Raven to mind. Something EAP about it: Dark & fanciful & deliciously mysterious. Such original pics & poem.
Chaitiamma said at 10:35 a.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
Beautiful contrast with beautiful poem !!!
Chesapeakekid said at 2:53 p.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
I love this.
Sirnicolay said at 5:46 p.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
Amazing work, YC! I love the poem and the pictures. WHat a profound journey! :)
Cowgirl said at 9:00 p.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
I looked at tjis early ...your tabblos are so interesting and clever ... Love the Poem
and your pix are so cool ....
YonderCreature said at 9:01 p.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
Andre: Thank you! I didn't know this could be considered a shpw, but I'm glad you like the idea.

Welshchick: Thanks for the compliments! Yes, it's true that broken dreams can lead to new paths of adventure--very well said!

Snooway: Thank you for making the effort to leave me a comment twice, my friend! Yes, I really like the last shot, too.

OscarDaniel: Yes, the last shot is one of my favourites, too. Thank you for your comment!

DocEna: Thanks for visiting by! That black and white shot is definitely one of my favourite shots and I'm glad you like it, too.

Mirella: You are very kind! Thank you so very much!

Wflorence: Wow, to be considered outstanding--high praise! Thank you!

Wildthing: What's EAP? Thank you for the lovely comment and I'm happy to know that someone else likes picture #3, too!

Chaitiamma: I'm glad you like the poem! Thanks!

Chesapeakekid: Thank you for the fave and I'm happy that you visited by!

Sirnicolay: Thank you very much! Yes, life's a profound journey, isn't it? Thanks for the comment!
YonderCreature said at 9:22 p.m. on Jul 18, 2008:
Cowgirl: Thank you! I'm glad you don't find this boring and I'm pleased that you like the poem! I can't take credit for all the photos, but I'm blessed with talented friends.
Maz2001 said at 10:32 a.m. on Jul 19, 2008:
Such a wonderful poem. You matched it perfectly with the photos. Congratulations. Great Tabblo.
Lifequest22 said at 11:42 a.m. on Jul 19, 2008:
I like how your poem and photos took us along the path from despair and loneliness to an ephiphany of hope and possibilities.
Debdog said at 4:25 p.m. on Jul 20, 2008:
I LOVE THIS>>>feels like the journey I took (in my life) before my rebirth with a new heart FAV
YonderCreature said at 12:47 p.m. on Jul 21, 2008:
Maz2001: Thanks! Yes, I tried to match the photos with the poem, but it didn't always work out the way I wanted it to, but thank you for your kind words!

Lifequest22: What an elegant comment! Thank you!

Debdog: Thanks for the fav and I am pleased that you were able to personally connect your own experiences with this tabblo! May you continue to thrive and shine!
YorkJodi said at 1:45 p.m. on Jul 21, 2008:
An excellent job of photos matching your melancholy poem... life has so many paths and any choice we make means a whole different future... I love the last photo and hope the last path you chose took you to much happiness...
21-gramm said at 7:26 p.m. on Aug 7, 2008:
Great Spectacle!
Candlepower said at 7:57 p.m. on Aug 7, 2008:
Fantastic Tabblo! Well done!
Clydo said at 7:00 p.m. on Oct 29, 2008:
great poem and images!
YonderCreature said at 2:37 a.m. on Oct 30, 2008:
Thanks, YorkJodi--I appreciate your well-wishes!

Thank you, 21-Gramm and Candlepower!

Clydo: Thanks for taking time to read the poem!
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