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autumn haiku

no telegram today

only more leaves

fell

 

jack kerouac

 

ce matin c'est l'automne -

à dire ces mots

je me sens vieillir

 

kobayashi issa

nightfall

too dark to read the page

too cold

 

jack kerouac

ik denk wel eens na

over het een en ander

soms ook over jou

 

majumau

pour celui qui part

pour celui qui reste -

deux automnes

 

yosa buson

autumn wind -

he pretends not to see me

as he passes

 

masajo suzuki

a quiet autumn night

and these fools

are starting to argue

 

jack kerouac

schreib schneller

die Tage

werden kürzer

 

martin berner

uragiru ka uragiraruru ka mozu takane

 

masajo suzuki
COMMENTS
Pkeener said at 9:59 p.m. on Oct 16, 2008:
took me away. yiu had me at JAck. but the photos upstage even his haiku. Dig it.
Andre. said at 10:34 p.m. on Oct 16, 2008:
Very autumn and wet. Summer is over I guess...2 bad...
Pkeener said at 11:21 p.m. on Oct 16, 2008:
the layout is really really tight! the last 2 shots!!
Leftofcenter said at 11:25 p.m. on Oct 16, 2008:
hey you two! yes very wet autumn in Montreal. took those shots today, Pam. down the street. i live in the woods, don't have to travel far for some autumn colors. ya think anyone will drop in to view this tab? it's in yesterday's batch...
Lifequest22 said at 11:27 p.m. on Oct 16, 2008:
A little autumn magic here created with your images and Kerouac. It's like a literary magazine layout.
Leftofcenter said at 11:38 p.m. on Oct 16, 2008:
thank you for not mentioning the P word (the other P word!) ;) tgif!
Lifequest22 said at 12:01 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
I really like this tabblo.
Mariusblack said at 12:13 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
oh, i love this Annelies! the words and the images. the first pic is brilliant. well done on your PP. =) ahh, i have yet to experience the beauty of fall. must be truly magical, if i were to base from this tabblo. =) this a TOD for me! =)
Pkeener said at 12:21 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
no P word, or L word. LOL. I am with M! TOD in my book. lovely.
Janer said at 12:39 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Wow! and another wow!
AliDar said at 12:53 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
I couldn't figure out what that language the last haiku was in.
AliDar said at 1:20 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
nah, ... I was wanting to write a haiku comment, but that's your territory and Jacks, not mine. ... I agree with Linda, everything about this tab makes me feel like I'm viewing a quality literary mag. ... I don't know what the P word is, but I'm thinking the L word is love, but I don't care, because I DO love the combination of the the fifth and sixth shots, one crisp and detailed, and the other more ... impressionistic (?) Side by side they highlight each others qualities, and I think, add a lot to the reflective quality of this tab. ... btw, the shot above that set, makes me think of you for some reason. :)
Chiloedream said at 4:07 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Ton automne est le plus beau des poèmes. C'est émouvant et simple, tout ce que j'aime. Bravo sweet Bc, bises. Tc.
Wildthing said at 4:31 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
I think you nailed autumn with these terrific shots.
a gray sky
above leaves of gold
that will fade
Whya said at 5:59 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
simply <3 this.
Nina1960 said at 6:09 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Ik kan niets zeggen als.... SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL...
Cowgirl said at 6:28 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
I love # 4 great set ..
Leftofcenter said at 7:29 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Thanks BOBBIE, MARIAN -a Dutch haiku for us :) APRIL -A rules :) MIKE -that's a fragile haiku for a cowboy/I'm impressed! merci TC -les haikus d'automne sont mes préférés BTC :) Thx DAR -#4 is a classic ME photo you're so right, shadows dancing on the wall.. obsession.. last haiku is in... Japanese, I'll give the translation later. thank you JANER for 2 wow's :) KEENA M word? just woke up, have to think- AMIGA this tab was created with you in the back of my lefty mind-u-know-why! :) thanks MARIUS even tho you DID say the P word!! and ANDRE ;)
Pkeener said at 8:14 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
M work is MArius! that way i dont typo. lol.

Shades of LC
Pkeener said at 8:15 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Dig it.
Leftofcenter said at 8:20 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
I dig (rock 'n roll music...)
Ira said at 9:47 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Autumn. Pulls my soul. Takes away my fun. I wait winter and white snow. And then spring!:) Life and light! It is necessary only a little to wait...
Gerardfotografeert said at 10:10 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Dit is een geweldig mooi tabblo geworden Annelies. De combinatie van mooie foto's en de pakkende Haiku erbij, prachtig gedaan.
Siagian said at 11:29 a.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
photographic poetry... no words needed, but the verses work a charm...nice work Annelies.
Chilla said at 3:23 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Wonderful! The way you use the pictures and the poetry is a delight
Pkeener said at 5:16 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
i dig the mamas and the papas
21-gramm said at 5:41 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
very beautiful and very Japanees!! WTG!
Achtung_baby said at 7:00 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
shall I betray him
or let him betray me?
the shrike's shrill cry
EMA said at 7:27 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Very beautiful and creative! I like it a lot!
Pkeener said at 7:47 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
your whisper remains
fading like the autumn leaves
kissed by winter's frost
Leftofcenter said at 7:57 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
that's so cool Keena, thanks! remember the "pk haikus" on our first (and last! lol) collaboration tab?

http://www.tabblo.com/studio/stories/view/281736/
Leftofcenter said at 8:00 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
thanks everyone, bedankt, domo arigato! :)
AliDar said at 8:03 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
I don't have to see the link, I remember them. :) Pam that haiku gives a very solid image. ... Sorry I'm eavesdropping. It's just that when I see something from people I care about my attention is peaked.
Welshchick said at 11:01 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
Poignant and heartfelt Annelies~ I love the way your leaves act out the script~~~You are good my friend~ Hugs always!
Mariusblack said at 11:36 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
ooops. sorry.didn't know it was forbidden, the P word. won't do it again. peace! =)
Leftofcenter said at 11:56 p.m. on Oct 17, 2008:
M, it's coz I'm presently in rehab for photoshop addiction, shhhhhh... ;)
thanks Rhonda, hey Dar! TGIF!
AliDar said at 2:25 a.m. on Oct 18, 2008:
Back at you Annelies! :)
Nina1960 said at 3:27 a.m. on Oct 18, 2008:
The dutch haiku is prachtig...de foto die je hebt geplaatst bij nightfall is denk ik mijn favoriet..het lijkt alsof een vrouw voor het raam staat met haar handen in het haar en dan zie ik mijzelf..prachtige foto....allemaal...heel je tabblo..
Leftofcenter said at 7:39 a.m. on Oct 18, 2008:
op een zonnige dag
staat toch de regenboog vol tranen
en ik vergeet dat ik ouder wordt

marcel etiënne

thanks for that link, Marian! :) Dutch haikus, who would've thought???

sunny day
rainbow full of tears
I forget that I'm getting older
Debdog said at 1:09 p.m. on Oct 18, 2008:
my favorite season is fall
love the warm richness of the colors, and the great light and shadow...love the abstract b/w does not matter what it is.....personal faves 2, 6 and last. one of your finest ;)
Shenresi said at 2:19 a.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
wundervoll mit den Bildern und der Lyrik in allen Sprachen, aber wo ist ein Text in deutsch???
Leftofcenter said at 7:44 a.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
I added a GERMAN haiku (SEE LAST PICTURE) how could I forget!!! Sorry Angela!!

write faster
the days
are getting shorter...
Sd14 said at 2:51 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
very good very minamilist ,

shoot a bit faster,
get in out of the rain,
behind the window pain,

just a little something crossed my mind nice tabblo&nice haikus.

thank you for this tabblo,


joe
Bucketsmedia said at 5:04 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
rad
Wahoogin said at 6:09 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
Wow, so much to process :) Thanks for a great tab!
Leftofcenter said at 6:25 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
cool, everyone's leavin' a haiku behind! thanks Joe! thanks Deb, Ginny. JJ? is that you?
Lifequest22 said at 7:05 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
shadows shiver
in autumn's passing
lonliness abounds
AliDar said at 8:37 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
Quiet reflections
Autumn colours light dancing
Patterns of simple joy
Leftofcenter said at 8:53 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
just to let you know that there will be NO awards for best haiku! :))))))))))))
AliDar said at 8:59 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
Didn't expect one. It's reward enough having it published on such a noteworthy tabblo. :)
Leftofcenter said at 9:00 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
<G>?
AliDar said at 9:02 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
Nope, full smile.
Clydo said at 10:02 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
#5 is an autumn haiku in itself! Love this tab Annelies!
Clydo said at 10:04 p.m. on Oct 19, 2008:
Let me add to that... every leaf in your tab is a haiku! and so are the twig shadows!!!
Abking said at 12:27 a.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
I was bracing myself for an avalanche of fall tabblos, and this is terrific! For me, this will be THE fall tabblo. OK, I might check out some others, I might even make one, but for now, this is it!
Whya said at 12:37 a.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
<3 everyone's haiku too!
Leftofcenter said at 6:57 a.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
APRIL! where is your haiku?? :) thank you 'CLYDO' I had actually considered a one-photo-tab with the twig shadows! thank you ALLAN, I hereby promise my tabs will always be "random cohesion that sound like jazz" (someone said that once???)
Krisu said at 7:59 a.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
Poetic and serene and sad and beautiful.
Candlepower said at 12:24 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
Stunning shots so full of felling and Atmosphere! Love this!
Babooshka said at 2:02 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
EEN ABSOLUTE FAVORIET! HEEL MOOI HOE JE DIE KLEUREN VOOR ELKAAR KRIJGT EN DE COMPOSITIE VAN DE FOTO'S EN JE LAY OUT, PERFECT GEWOON!
Mantel.d said at 3:20 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
Feuilles d'Automne ? C'est le père Hugo qui aurait été content... Il aurait mis un super commentaire . Bravo pour cette série très raffinée D.M.
Leftofcenter said at 3:40 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
on manque de Frenchies dans Tabblo! :))
bon alors j'y vais:
rêver, c'est le bonheur, attendre c'est la vie... FEUILLES D'AUTOMNE Victor Hugo
Merci DM!
Leftofcenter said at 3:40 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
hey Booshka, waar is jou haiku? daar ben je toch zo goed in, gedichtjes???
Pkeener said at 5:57 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
i think Achtungbaby wins. but i really like mine. ;)
BERRY36 said at 6:13 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
Très joli tabblo, sensible et émouvant.
Je fais un essai, pour mon mari décédé un 20 octobre :

Silence de la mort
Arrivée depuis six ans
Quand cesseras-tu

C
Lifequest22 said at 6:16 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
Well, I like mine even with the typo.
Leftofcenter said at 8:52 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
Fragile et émouvant ton haiku, Claude. Merci de le partager avec moi/nous.
Leftofcenter said at 8:56 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
Hey thugs, AchtungBaby doesn't win because "her" haiku is the translation of the Japanese one I put at the end. It's from Masajo Suzuki. I like your haiku a lot, Keena, all the more because there are NO typos in those 3 lines- of course I can't say the same for amiga... oh WOTEVA, you both WIN, share the podium, no pushing please.
Pkeener said at 11:59 p.m. on Oct 20, 2008:
typos, schmypos. it aint ovah til the fat lady sings. but i am glad you like it
Abking said at 12:22 a.m. on Oct 21, 2008:
Annelies, pat yourself on the back for not only an excellent tabblo, but also for opening a poetry space. Random cohesion at its finest!
Hollyridger said at 2:02 a.m. on Oct 21, 2008:
Exceptional tabblo.... I shall return again and again.
Charlespop said at 7:59 a.m. on Oct 21, 2008:
Multilingual coolness....arigato gozaimashita !
Snooway said at 8:42 a.m. on Oct 21, 2008:
wonderful combination of images and words
Eduardo.affonso said at 8:48 a.m. on Oct 21, 2008:
Who said one can't reach perfection?
Leftofcenter said at 9:24 a.m. on Oct 21, 2008:
okok enough already Mr Bwana! :)

THANK YOU AGAIN EVERYONE, thank for the haikus (and I didn't even have to start a new group!) I had fun with this tab, you may have noticed I used the P-word on some of the photos, what a revelation to me- but I won't overdo it, promis juré!
Riponbd said at 12:32 p.m. on Oct 21, 2008:
wonderful
Pkeener said at 9:38 a.m. on Oct 23, 2008:
still going strong. kewl cool kool, Leftie. you da bst.
PhotoPop said at 9:42 a.m. on Oct 23, 2008:
Another autumn, another passage.
Pkeener said at 11:36 a.m. on Oct 23, 2008:
i love autumn
Leftofcenter said at 1:58 p.m. on Oct 23, 2008:
thanks sis, one more Kerouac for you

whatever it is, I quit
-now I'll let my
breath out -
Leftofcenter said at 2:00 p.m. on Oct 23, 2008:
thanks POP, missed ya- I'm afraid
"another autumn
another passage" does not qualify as a haiku, you're missing a line, or one word... ;)
PhotoPop said at 3:06 p.m. on Oct 23, 2008:
I know, it is all that I could come up with at the moment. Beautiful and tragic.
Leftofcenter said at 5:37 p.m. on Oct 23, 2008:
ok, so let's try:

another autumn
another passage
beautiful and tragic

that works! yeah POP, you just wrote a HAIKU!!! :)
PhotoPop said at 8:26 a.m. on Oct 24, 2008:
Annelies, what I needed was a creative woman's touch. Thank you.
Mirella said at 3:16 p.m. on Oct 24, 2008:
A little bit sad like autumn leaves, but beautiful Tabblo. Excellent details. Ciao
Whya said at 1:49 a.m. on Oct 26, 2008:
i'm back to see more ... :)
Leftofcenter said at 9:24 a.m. on Oct 26, 2008:
Hi A!
HtD said at 4:11 a.m. on Jan 13, 2009:
Annelies, deze tabbo is weer Kunst. Een mooie tabblo
Hyhoa said at 9:50 p.m. on Aug 7, 2009:
Tres poetique Anne Lise, je me rappelle un autre Tabblo de toi des feuilles d Automne ,il y a quelques années
Quelques Hai Ku d ' Automne pour toi

Une rafale de vent
puis les feuilles
se reposent
(Basho )

Ce chemin
personne ne le prend
que le couchant d'automne
(Bashô )

Un oiseau chanta -
tomba au sol
une baie rouge
(Shiki )

Vent d'automne
Voyageur dans ce monde flottant
J'ignore où tu vas
(Shiki )
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