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Maiden's Tear Changes Life of Beast Forever

by Jose Enrique F. Fausto

This all happened because Belle missed her family after spending her entire year in a strange magical castle where the beast stays. This was because the beast forced her father to let his daughter stay in the castle. Only with true love will this beast find itself back to his old, human life and this was his plan to do so. Everything went well for the beast until she begs it to let her see her family again and he cannot refuse because he understands her situation. He let her go and gave her a mirror to see him and a ring to return to the castle. She promised to return in a week but that didn't happen because her older sisters saw her well dressed and fed and so were envious and made her stay through begging. She was moved and stayed longer than she promised the beast. When she came back, she thought she was too late. She was greatly saddened and with a tear, she saved the life of the beast.

On the 8th of January Belle should have returned to the castle but did not and this greatly saddened the beast because all of his hopes for the life he once had is now gone. Three days after the expected return, Belle feels guilty and decides to look at the mirror the beast gave her. She was horrified to see the beast lying on the floor half dead because of a heartbreak. She returns immediately to the castle with the ring the beast also gave. When she held the dead body of the beast, she mourned for his death. She realized she actually loves this beast and a tear fell from her cheek and unto the beasts fur. He was then revived and turned back to what he was, a handsome prince.

The fallen tear of love of a woman named Belle revives the life of the beast and turns it, back to a he.

COMMENTS
Sirnicolay said at 9:29 p.m. on Jan 7, 2009:
Lots of verb tense inconsistencies and some commas missing. The lead is also a bit vague. 87
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