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12 Hours

Their pain, unbearable. Their suffering, beyond human comprehension. Their constant cries to the world, halted by a woman with a meat cleaver in the streets of Hong Kong. Melancholia grips my heart as I tell the tale of the world's most unsung hero.

 

They give more than the versatile coconut and has sacrificed more than the life-giving cow, and yet, no religion has made it sacred, no government has made it protected, and no individual never had the attention span to tell its story.

 

Until I came along.

 

Its twelve hour chronicle remains the traffic of my tabblo.

Please bear with me, for I am a very bad poet and can't find a rhyme for tabblo.

As the eighth passes by, a dilemma ensures

should it leave its young, or walk away complete with its own two shoes.

 

The last quarter of its sad tale comes about,

it jumps to evade those hungry humans, pointing its tongue straight out.

But alas! To its dismay,

on hour ten, it realized it couldn't fly away.

As it plummeted down, blaming genetics,

it started to disobey the basics of farm animal ethics.

On the twelfth hour of everyday, just as the plot thickens

it gets covered with gravy, and becomes everyone's favorite fried chickens.

For all live and fried chicken everywhere.

Sources:

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/187/438615164_d5fd6f5072.jpg

http://www.how-to-draw-cartoons-online.com/image-files/cartoon_chicken.gif

http://www.cksinfo.com/clipart/animals/birds/chickens/ChickenCartoon4.jpg

http://outdoors.mainetoday.com/children/kidtracks/flyingchicken1_blog.jpg

As the second hour passes, in its brilliant chase

It worries for its yolk, and where it should be placed.

As the clock strikes its third, it takes its rest

sitting upon an enamel bump, awaiting the inevitable blood fest.

"Four, four, I can take no more!"

It cries out, fearing it might be brought to a supermarket....store.

The fifth chapter quickly arrives,

the hungry villagers staring intently, leaps then dives.

On the first hour of everyday, exactly at the break of dawn

it evades hungry knives and forks as quick as the forest fawn.

Halfway through the chronicle, formulating a hunch,

it believes those hungry villagers want it for lunch.

As the afternoon begins with hour seven,

it knows it should flee, or win a one way trip to heaven.

COMMENTS
Tazzari said at 9:59 a.m. on Feb 14, 2009:
Woot! Epic win tabblo, Douglas! :D ToD
Eduardo.affonso said at 10:07 a.m. on Feb 14, 2009:
Touching. I'm speechless. Can't even open my fridge now, where I will certainly find some remains of some martyrs. TOD is not enough for this. It deserves a national holiday!
Jamesttieng said at 10:07 a.m. on Feb 14, 2009:
Amazing. :O
Doogieisdamann said at 10:14 a.m. on Feb 14, 2009:
thanks for commenting! :D
Tazzari said at 11:51 a.m. on Feb 14, 2009:
Yes! Now I pity chickens, too! :((

Douglas' poem evokes the sympathy we all keep deep inside for these lovely birds. May they rest in peace... in stomachs everywhere.
Chiloedream said at 1:44 p.m. on Feb 14, 2009:
Génial et touchant. merci.
Tristanjonel said at 7:07 a.m. on Feb 15, 2009:
Wow. This is simply amazing. I could never do anything like this...
Doogieisdamann said at 7:17 a.m. on Feb 15, 2009:
thanks for commenting! :D
Soccer0rocker said at 5:21 a.m. on Feb 19, 2009:
I'd have to say good job Douglas! :D
Sirnicolay said at 7:44 p.m. on Mar 9, 2009:
One of the best tabblos I've seen. Great, great, great. :) 100
Sirnicolay said at 7:45 p.m. on Mar 9, 2009:
You make all of the chickens in the entire world proud. :D
Doogieisdamann said at 3:13 a.m. on Mar 10, 2009:
LOL :D
Tazzari said at 9:08 a.m. on Mar 10, 2009:
It's amazing how our batch comprises mostly of people who were born during the Year of the Rooster (in Chinese Calendar thingy). Then 'cher says that you make all the chickens proud, and we are proud of you... What a coincidence. o.o
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